Willie Said:

Find the best career for me, get 10 points!!?

We Answered:

Become a fashion magazine editor in chief and run your own fashion company. You can use your writing talents to establish the industry standards, and be your own runway girl for your company. As CEO you probably need to know business / economic background and that is where your interests in business ties in.

I'm think leaving politics out would be best, but if you try to go zoolander route, it may just work.

Stanley Said:

Can you tell me Which Candidate this person is ?

We Answered:

John Edwards.

Alice Said:

Any advice on this College Essay?

We Answered:

to be honest, the essay has a weak start, and has quiet a bit of gramatical errors.

I think that you should focus mainly on having bells palsy, and how it has effected your life, they way you think, and the way you see things. Like, do you see yourself as beautiful still? if so, then how has this disease changed your outlook on beauty? do you see yourself stronger after being diagnosed? strnger in a spiritual sense?

you have a lot of cliches, especially in the end, however, you can really go far with just focusing on bells palsy, and how you have changed from it, hopefully for the better. and from there, you can add a few lines on how it has influenced you to go into the field of neurology and help others facing your problem, and possibly find a cure, knowing what other people go through since you have a nuerological disease.

don't talk about other careers and tyra and little wayne and blahhh blahhh, be straight and to the point with your essay, you have around 500 words to write with, so get to it.

now that is a strong essay, work with that, and shoe it to a guidance counselor or english teacher and ask for their advice.

good luck!