Marilyn Said:

Is this character well-rounded and likeable?

We Answered:

overall this is very good but in your first paragraph you seem to be trying to force it to meet your prompt. Just as a suggestion I made some changes in it.

For the last week I have spent every minute of free time preparing for interviews with three of the local hospitals, the best that San Francisco has to offer. I'm really excited about the prospect of finally starting my internship, of finally being addressed as Doctor Madison. My whole college career has centered on the point in my life when I will put on a lab coat and walk through the hospital doors. I know that is where I belong---where I can help people.

Dolores Said:

Anyone know Barry Bonds HR milestones he has against the Dodgers?

We Answered:

Put some gasoline in a flask and bring it to the park. If you catch #755 or 756, pour some gas on the ball. Light it on fire and toss it back on the field.

I really would forego whatever amount of money that jackass would throw at the person who catches it, just to go down in history as baseball's greatest fan.