Jamie Said:

What do you think of my cover letter?

We Answered:

I got to the first sentence and quit.

(I used to work in HR - so heres a tip: Don't thank them)

I just tried reading it again.

Reduce it down to 2 paragraphs. What I won't write in the resume.
My Strength are..... Scan the book "what Color is your Papragraph" (at the library), Go to Barnes and Noble and relook at CV writing.
Second Paragraph of your CV Slightly interesting.

Where have you applied?

http://www.teacherjobs.com/
HTTP://WWW.EDJOIN.ORG


If this is a satifying response. Go to your local School and ask to speak to your mentor or a teacher or even the Principal and ask them if they see any faults.

Bob Said:

PLEASE read my cover letter!?

We Answered:

FIND OUT THE HR DEPARTMENT MANAGER'S NAME AND USE IT
I am applying TO BECOME A Customer Service Representative. I ENJOY INVOLVEMENT with customers. I have experience with customer service, cash handling and daily CUSTOMER interaction AS A XXXXX WITH XXX COMPANY. I feel this job requires many qualities that I have gained through my job experience (WITH WHO?) I WANT aN INTERESTING AND CHALLENGING career WITH CONSTANT LEARNING AND SKILL DEVELOPMENT.

Regards,

I KNOW THIS ISN'T PERFECT BUT AT LEAST IT STAYS AWAY FROM THE PASSIVE VOICE.

i KNOW TH