Maria Said:

Would you be so kind to check the grammar?

We Answered:

I have considered it as a matter of necessity to write this cover letter

Is that for us, or to go in the cover letter? I would definitely NOT include it.

My present seeking of a new job is a consequence of the decision to change career, which I have made 2 years ago.

Way too wordy!
I am looking for a new job consistent with the new career I chose two years ago to pursue.

My first education is juridical.
Then I have entered in economical university.

Not too clear, I would state the law and economics degrees you earned and when.

During my study I have realized that the legal field cannot satisfy my personal and professional ambitions.

Hmmm...maybe:
During my studies I have broadened my personal and professional ambitions beyond the legal field.

Beth Said:

Please give me advice on my COVER LETTER for a govt job. I revised it! Any more suggestions?

We Answered:

You are hired. I saw one typo in the last line. "to work in THE upcoming . . . ."

Milton Said:

How does my cover letter sound, any corrections please?

We Answered:

Second to last paragraph add "of" ...qualify me to be a member of your Company."

Christina Said:

Is this a good cover letter? any advice?

We Answered:

Reading this as a hiring manager, it would probably receive a second look because it is well-written. I cannot tell you how often I review cover letters, even for management positions, that are filled with grammatical and spelling errors. These letters are automatically filed in my circular file cabinet (i.e. my trash can).

My critique is that your second paragraph is HEAVY on "I" statements. Of your six sentences, five start with "I" and the fifth starts with "My." Try to rework the paragraph so it focuses more on the reviewer than on you. For example, your third sentence could be re-worded as, "There is a difference between a one-time customer and a long-term client; I am passionate about creating relationships for you that result in clients, not customers."

Good luck!