Clyde Said:

please check. shall my letter sounds OK? Best answer will be awarded today?

We Answered:

My name is Isse Said. I’m 20 years old, attending school at a local university. I’m interested in exploring combined experimental studies and gaining life experience, while broadening and backing up the skills I already have. ***I like the idea of working with people from different cultures. I am fluent in several languages and feel that volunteering will give me the experience needed to help me achieve my future goals. I enjoy this opportunity to see people all over the world to get together, *** I enjoy a range of multicultural events, sample *** all cultures delicious food and share stories of their country. ***I am enthusiastic to learn about other international volunteers and what they have achieved during their time on this project and I really would like to meet people from other countries and learn about their cultures. In my spare time I enjoy volunteer work and leisure activities, such as cross country running. I have always been interested in long distance running and have taken part in a number of races.
***In sixth-form I volunteered at my school in the area of physical fitness. I also volunteered to take part in university sports day, from which I gained further experience. In sixth-form I spent my lunch hour working as a part-time worker in the canteen giving out dinner tickets, helping out collecting dishes and other related duties and I also worked on parent’s evenings.
In order to get my driving license I work for volunteering in my local youth leisure centre.
I played for the school football team and for a team outside school and play many other sports for leisure.
As my career now I’m very interested becoming a dental hygienist. ***To progress my training in the dental field, I go to a health hospital dental department and shadow a trained dentist for a week. I gained a massive understanding of the working of the surgery, with opportunities to observe and speak to the doctor’s and hygienist regarding a medical career. I arranged another placement week myself at a local hospital, which was an opportunity to once again, observe medical practice, from another point of view.

Francis Said:

Help! What do you think of this interview thank you letter?

We Answered:

It looks pretty good except for a couple of things. Although they are slightly different, your first two sentences are essentially redundant. You could either drop one or combine them into one sentence. I think it's the repetition of "Manager position" at the end of each that is the real problem.

You also have a minor typo in towards the end. It should be a consistently changing work environment", not "an".

Lastly, I might shy away from using the phrase "fit in beautifully". It's not bad but something a more along the lines contributing member, outstanding performer, etc.

Overall I'd say it looks very good.

Louis Said:

Seeking a career not just a "job"?

We Answered:

You have to be an entrepreneur,and create your own business. If you can't ,just find someone that is doing it. Join their team and put your skills to the test. I have a career that I never would have guessed that I would have.It's a job that no one else has in the whole state! I'm a peanut roaster! I manage a small peanut roasting plant here in Washington state. I didn't even know I'd be doing thiswhen I was job hunting! It's a lot of fun! Not much money yet,but this is a growing business . It' s rewarding just to see your efforts making a difference. Find your niche and grab it!
GOOD LUCK !