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Anita Said:

Hey what kind of career is this ( http://www.vimeo.com/772901/ ) i know it is something in gaming but idk!?

We Answered:

Its most likely Computer Aided Drafting (CADD). Its basically making blueprints for games. I am also thinking about taking it for architectural blueprints.

Eduardo Said:

CAN YOU PlEASE HELP ME? IN URGENT NEED OF HELP WITH GRAMMAR! PLEASE AND THANKS! EASY TEN POINTS! THANKS!?

We Answered:

"It is also helpful in terms of understanding the world we live in today. I have also extended my ability to think critically and solve problems"

You used also two times in a row, it kind of makes one lose focus; not exactly a grammar error though. You ALSO use the word Also a lot throughout the paper. try removing it a few times. And your tenses are still switching from past to present. Be careful with that. You have a tendency to say has taught... and will teach... all in this one essay. (just an example, not your exact words).


"I have been through many tough times with my friends that have shaped me and encouraged me to use positive thinking I need to be a healthy individual"

perhaps say ... "the positive thinking that I need to be a healthy individual"....

Looks like you already incorportated some of my suggestions and those of others. Its looking great :) Hope we're helping and not making things worse.

Martin Said:

Prof Read this please? "short"?

We Answered:

Its not really that bad. I emailed you some changes

Travis Said:

What Does This Say About Us...?

We Answered:

American culture will pay more for entertainment than helping others.
We're shallow ;/

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