Billy Said:

PLEASE Help!!! I need ideas for an essay to get accepted into a program...?

We Answered:

Alright, I find your question disturbing. If this program is to foster creativity and entrepreneurial leadership, you should be fired up with your own juicy ideas.

If you just want to regurgitate stuff or worse, try and write what you think the committee wants to hear (bad move, sport), then you really have no business trying to get into this program. You will be outed for the fraud that you are in about 5 seconds.

Reguritation and brown nosing is more of an MBA tract, but even with that they still expect you to have your own ideas.

Seth Said:

PLEASE HELP!!! I need ideas for an essay to get accepted into a program..?

We Answered:

If your serious about this, than you will do it yourself, instead of cheating by asking people on yahoo.

Kim Said:

Training centers or consellors for rectors, housemasters for our orphanages?

We Answered:

Hi Pramod,

Its was really to read your message on yahoo.

My name is Avani Amin and I am from Mumbai. Is there any way I can help you, do let me know. I ould love to be at some help for these children.

You can mail me on : angel.avaani@yahoo.co.in

Thanks
Avani

Beth Said:

Could any English native speaker check this out?

We Answered:

This is very good, perhaps one might ponder on the reason to present in the first place, The reader is fully aware that you are the sole applicant and therefore it is you and no-one else communicating in this presentation, Over use of the LETTER I and MY needs to be studied with a view to eliminating some of them, repetition can become boring and cause a distraction to the reader, resulting in a missed opportunity

Hector Said:

May I request you to donate a school bus for underprivileged rural children ?

We Answered:

You should take someones help, like from a politician or a arrange a foundation with the children from the school, we are here just to answer and help with answering but not to donate.