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Mildred Said:

What do you think of these characters for a teen drama story?

We Answered:

Wow it sounds like you've put a lot of thought into these characters, good for you. The only thing that really concerns me is the fact that they all seem to live in there own little coven. Not to brag but I hang out with a group of intelligent peers and I am smart as well but we still out branch to the rest of society especially since we are girls we tend to be more social then guy are but that doesn't make it less important for us to get outside of our "group" sometimes and talk to other people who are very different. We are all very creative (again not to brag but one of my friends is an artist, the other a musician, and I'm an aspiring author) and since we are creative we're not lazy. In A and B they both are creative so it would be more realistic for them to follow their passion and be proactive about it.
What I would really love to see in this show is a variety of characters some twisted scenes and intermingling social groups thats what tends to make a show a hit. I personally think you should add a jock or a popular kid that was a past boyfriend of E/F and while he dates a lot of slutty girls really only has eyes for her. Then maybe an emo kid was once part of the group and the whole nerd/geek clique is trying to make her see that he/she is awesome and deserves to live. You should also add some family background to each character this tends to effect a characters personality and automatically makes the conflicts available endless which is what is needed for a long running show. One of them could have a big family and wants to be a star but is seen as just a kid who will follow in his/her father's/mother's footsteps, one could have dead parents and was adopted and has to deal with adjusting to a new school and new family, etc.
I'm sorry if this comes across as harsh I really don't mean it like that. I'm just trying to help you as much as possible. I really think that the characters are great these are just suggestions to make them and the show/story even better.

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