Eddie Said:

can someone edit my essay? thank you so much English is my second language I am learning?

We Answered:

I attempted to edit this for you. I found many grammatical errors, but since English isn't your native language, I didn't want to completely change the essay for you. I left your words intact, but made it a bit more literate.

See what you think:

I have volunteered to take care of children at school meetings, preschool, after-school programs and at the children's ministry. I have experienced the joy of working with children and learning about them as I volunteer. Teachers, as well as parents, suggest that I go into the field of education. I have, in fact considered a career in education as a preschool teacher. The duties of a preschool teacher include introducing three to six year old children to school. A preschool teacher has a college education, training, and has many duties, and responsibilities. They have a great work environment and a good salary with benefits.
First, preschool teachers require a Certificate of Achievement in Child Development including study in psychology, and training in helping children and families cope with crisis. Communication skills and learning about issues affecting families and children are necessary, but training starts when seeking work as a teacher's aide. Training to be a preschool teacher will depend on the level of schooling required. This varies by the degrees offered, such as: certificates or an associate degree, all requiring fees ranging from $780 full-time to $26 per unit part-time.
Secondly, Preschool teachers have many duties and responsibilities in regards to their work environment. Preschool teachers provide activities to stimulate children's growth in language, social, and motor sills, such as: learning to listen to instruction, playing with others, and using play equipment. A typical day in a preschool is filled with arts and crafts, music, language and numbers games, and various other fun things. Construction paper shapes and free play help children develop social skills. Every activity gives children an opportunity to learn.
Thirdly, the salary for a preschool teacher depends on experience, level of education, and the school and center where the teacher works. Salaries range from about $2,800 per month to $34,700 per year. Public schools usually have benefits, insurance and retirement. The rewards are priceless, because children’s smiles and hugs pay off any job that one has a passion for.
In summary, I will keep volunteering at church with the children's ministry and take all the courses in early childhood at my local community college to receive a Certificate of Achievement as a Child Development teacher, as well as the required classes for an Associates Degree. It will require at least 12 units to get my teaching licenses through these programs. But once I am finished, I can start my career as a preschool teacher.

Elizabeth Said:

i need information on becoming a counselor for abused/troubled children?

We Answered:

You wanna be a counselor for troubled/abused kids? I'll tell you what to do. Don't patronize them and pretend that you care! If you do this job, you're most likely going to be with the state or DHR. Well, you'll have alot of different kids to deal with. So treat them like individuals! Remember their names! Don't keep looking at your watch every 3 minutes! Listen to 'em when they tell you that someones abusing 'em and DON'T tell 'em they're just saying for attention because they had crappy government-run lives and send them back to f-ing Three Springs!!!

Timothy Said:

A Pros and Cons question, please help?

We Answered:

I like 2 - and you could accomplish it thru nite courses or on-line while you can still work and support your family too....

all in all - remember it's something that you are probably going to spend a good chunk of your time doing - so make sure it's something you enjoy. I work in a lower paying job (my choice), but not once in 11 years have I gotten up and said "eeew. I have to go to work today". that's gotta count for something - @least it does in my book.

good luck - whatever you decide to be......

Marcus Said:

I am supposed to write an essay?

We Answered:

I would talk about the Day Care, because it is part of the same company. Be sure not to put in that that is what your initial goal was, because that may leave the impression that you didn't want to work there. In an essay, make sure you get right to the point. If you need help with the format of the essay, you can google "format of an essay" and it should come up. Don't be nervous, just write like you are talking to someone about your future job. If you follow these tips you should be fine.

Victoria Said:

I am having writers block and could use some help.?

We Answered:

In the first paragraph you are saying that we are happy that Mandy is joining, then at the end of that paragraph you say we would like. That just confuses me.
Um i dont think you should mention the childrens hospital thing after you speak of yr children and then in the next paragraph.