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Definition Of Career Development

Vernon Said:

How does this sound?Pleasee please read?

We Answered:

It is well-stated, quite eloquent, but because of the length it might get nothing more than a skim down the center of the page. You have a lot of unnecessary words and statements, I for one balked when I saw the length, so do imagine in your minds eye the reader of like applications for college programs who may have 30 or 40 or more of these to wade through (not just yours) and realize that yours might be the one over-looked, because of its length.

You did a super job but I do believe seriously that they want 'The facts ma'am, nothing but the facts', and they mean YOUR facts, because that's all they have time for when going through a stack of applications.

This is my opinion and my opinion only and I wish you the best of luck with your future plans and getting in to the college of your choice.

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