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Australian Public Service Careers

Sherri Said:

i am after constructive critisism on my resume. please read?

We Answered:

You go off topic on your "objective", talking about your age, experience and self perception of your personality. It should read more like this:

My long-term career goal is to become an accomplished flight attendant. My present career goal is to gain high-quality experience in the hospitality industry. I am interested in a part-time or casual job.

Completely omit the entire list of classes you took in high school.

The rest of it is fine, include your references.

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