Daniel Said:

please read my essay and tell me what you think and can evaluate it if you have time?

We Answered:

The essay is fine. The grammar is horrid, but I think you already know that. I am just as horrid in my second language with the same kinds of grammatical errors.
I think you have used spell check but you need to go back and read your essay to pick up words that are correctly spelled but not the word you intended to write. For example:

"...statement (GS) or statement of fact (SF). I told her advise seriously and memorize everything in her lecture and was able to improve on organizing my essay. "

should be "I took her advise..." where you need to change told to took. Told was not picked up by spell check.

Julia Said:

please read my essay and tell me what you think and can evaluate it if you have time?

We Answered:

Sentences too long.
Paragraphs too long.
Some misspelling.
Some errors in punctuation.
Some disjointed sentences.

Thoughts need better organizing.

Make notes of your individual thoughts from the entire essay, in each paragraph, then try to organize them better. You'll find some duplication or similarities.

I'm not trying to just criticize your work, but a teacher will not be too accepting as it is.

This really needs lots of work.

Sorry, but we all have/had to learn these things.

Jeanne Said:

Petty Theft in CA of $45. What should I do?

We Answered:

If you have no prior conviction or are not on probation you should be able to get Diversion if available in your county. I suspect the code is wrong as well but you best hope it doesnt read 459! thats burglary and a felony. Try the forum site below there you can get answers without sarcasm or judgment. Its also a "safe place" to ask questions.

Monica Said:

Is it possible to enroll myself into san diego state university considering my poor academic record..?

We Answered:

SDSU has really tightened admissions. You now need about a 3.4 to get in. A lot of people are applying. It is hard to get in, unless you are a community college transfer. It's a popular, impacted campus.

You said: "I did not even take my SAT's yet but I keep hearing that the standards of being accepted to SDSU is not really high."

They're not as stringent as the ivies but you still need good grades! And yes, you need your SATs to get into SDSU unless you are a cc transfer.

They do not take lower division transfer students. You must have a minum of 60 transferable units. They won't accept a transfer with any less, unless you were under the dual-admit system that they got rid of a couple of years ago.

And Bill, it isn't an easy school. The professors have graduated from fine schools and they are excellent at what they do. They expect a lot.

Of course, people who don't go there wouldn't know that and they just assume that just because it's not a holier-than-thou public ivy that the students don't have to work hard which is FALSE (I know you didn't mean it like that Bill, I have seen a lot of your posts and they are fair).