Rene Said:

Should I take my teacher up on his offer?

We Answered:

You should give yourself as many different opportunities as possible to widen your knowledge of possible careers by going to career days, contact local businesses in your relevant field for instance a newspaper if your good at English and Politics. You sound that you need to find something that your really passionate about. Then everything will naturally progress from there.

Louis Said:

Please tell me if this is good or not!!!?

We Answered:

No, it is not well written. It is based on myth and stereotype rather than fact, and is full of inaccuracies and ignorance.

It shows that you did very little research. For that fact alone, if you handed me this piece of work I would reject it.

Amy Said:

Can I get HIV from an old razor I used over the weekend?

We Answered:

HIV is very fragile man. It dies within min to hours on open surfaces.
I have many people come in with HIV symptoms, and they are postive they have it. How many people that come in with these symtoms have it? 1 percent. You can give your self symptoms by thinking you have it.

The hardest part is telling these people to let it go. They refuse to, as you i bet your searching 100's of websites looking for more and more info! If you take a test im postive it will come out as HIV negative.

Just relax man! Take it easy!!
Work on freaking out.

Jon Said:

Can you correct my English?

We Answered:

I'm putting brackets around things that should/could be changed. :]

Different people have different ideas about tuition fees for university students. Some people believe that tuition fees for university students should be free[, o]ther people believe that [higher education students] should be charged tuition fees. Personally, I believe that tuition fees for university students should be free for the following three reasons.

First [of all], it will produce [a] more skilled workforce. As countries become more developed, they need [a] more highly-trained workforce. For example, more and more workers use specialized technology [as well as] skills in their companies. Nowadays [it is common for] most people need to attend college to [have] knowledge [necessary] for their careers. In order to give students the opportunities to go to college and increase the number of educated labor force, governments should cover tuition fees [omitted because it was unnecessary]. [On the other hand,] if students have to pay for tuition fees it will cause shortage of skilled workforce. Many students will give up going to college and [don't have the chance] to acquire [the] necessary knowledge for their careers.

Secondly, it is reasonable to think governments should cover tuition fees for university because graduates bring benefits to society as a whole. For example, graduates in medicine will contribute to the advancement of medical science[, and] it will provide people with high-quality medical care services. Moreover, graduates in economics will help activate economies. Their business skills can attract more commerce and make our society richer. The benefits graduates bring to society as a whole outweigh tuition fees governments should cover.

[finally], it will eliminate discrimination against those from poorer backgrounds. Tuition fees for university students discriminate enormously against low-income groups. It is true that some students get students loans[, but] many people of low income give up taking out student loans because they can’t get into debt.[ People who have rich people(This doesn't make any sense, maybe you mean 'People who are rich have economic advantages.], on the other hand, have economic advantages. They don’t have to pay tuition fees by themselves. Tuition fees for university should be free in order to red[add]ress this inequality.

In conclusion, for these three reasons, producing more skilled workforce, bring benefits to society as a whole, eliminating discrimination against those from poorer backgrounds,[I think] tuition fees for university students should be free.



This is a very good essay. I think the problems were merely slightly grammatical. I see a lot of mistakes that are commonly made by non-native English speakers, and I think it has a lot to do with the way we conjugate things in the English language. They were very minor, though, and they could just as well be made by native English speakers!

One tip I have, well, two tips,

-Don't start a sentence with 'and'. It is incorrect to use 'and' at the beginning of a sentence in a formal document or essay. The only time 'and' should be used at the beginning of a sentence is in speech or written dialogue.

-Normally sentences don't begin with 'but', it is common to use a comma and then follow it with 'but'.

Overall I think you did a wonderful job, and I too wish tuition was free! I'm one of those poor people who has gone into debt while getting their education.