Gladys Said:

Can you correct this text in English?

We Answered:

As time goes on the way women are treated has changed for the better. However it seems that some things stand at a halt for women. In egypt women were worshipped for because they were considered the origin of the world. Then in roman times it changed again and women had less rights than before. Christianity then reversed the roles again and made women less important. She was seen as someone to induce man into sin. Men always were considered better because they were alowed to be stronger. Some cultures women are still treated badly like in the muslim world. After a while women got more rights. Women still have difficulty getting better jobs but they are advancing. Today women can be doctors or lawyers..

Micheal Said:

Am I really as big of a slacker as I just made my self feel like, or do I just know how to be happy?

We Answered:

i think you're smart enough to understand yourself and what you want. I'm not a counsellor by the way.

first, you know one day - you will have to take care of yourself completely. at that time, you won't be seeing people around you now - you will have different people or friends. being lazy is fine when you have everyone around you and being still young.

think what if you have to work for life but 3-4 days off as you desire in a week and what if you have to work only a decade or two and rest all the rest of your life and do whatever you like?

once youth is over, you can't get it back. now you have energy, memory, and people who can understand you and help you. hopefully you will get similar opportunity from different people. but are you going to waste your talent, your opportunity, and your life?

It seem you have not found your desired path yet. I think you have to work on this more seriously. Tourism industry is fine for you I think but I don't know much about it. Anyway, take care.

Georgia Said:

help me to correst this article and this report please!?

We Answered:

I don't think that you will get many answers to YOUR homework in this,the Royalty category.If you want help with YOUR homework,it would be better to post your question in the correct category and that is the "Homework" category

Laura Said:

who can help me to correct this report and this article?

We Answered:

first of all when you describe a job or refer to it, you must use an accepted definition - check any job site to find the definition. then get the info from students as to which aspects of the job are most important to them.

now, you have left a very long description which requires some time. while i look this over, you need to do something else:

correct the grammar and spelling.
use one pronoun and stick to it - s/he covers everyone. the singular, please. no "he" and "they", it shows a confused and confusing person, namely the writer - you.
tense: present, do not mix up the past, present and future.

more confusion arises when you refer to the school's visits -???
also, you do not indicate whether you have determined that a social organizer IS NEEDED.

i have rewritten a part of your epic. study it and rewrite your assignment so that it is clear, easily understood, free of verbiage, and covers all necessary aspects.

"-SOCIAL ORGANIZER

THE JOB:
describe what a SO does
include: students must receive the information about school events in a timely manner and s/he must be easily reachable by telefone or by email. also include that an SO must make travel arrangements and collect and forward money for trips etc

PERSONALITY REQUIRED:

A Social Organiser must be sociable, honest, punctual and have a high degree of organisation,
A a member of the Student Committee is preferred over an older person as s/he would be more in tune with the likes and dislikes of the students, which is important in organising the school's parties "

Lucille Said:

Tips, Advice, and things to expect for Premed?

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-Type of school doesn't matter. Public vs. private doesn't matter. I'm a transfer, but not from a CC. Buy the MSAR in your Junior year of undergrad. Don't get over-excited and buy the books early - they have different editions every few years. www.aamc.org

-I don't recommend you overloading yourself with trying to study stuff you think you might learn in med school. Take anatomy classes in undergrad if you like because they are fun, but don't try to get ahead - focus on your undergrad studies. Again, I will link you to aamc.org. For media and other books you kinda have to search around - there's a lot.

-Study time comes before social time. It's recommended you study 2 hours for every hour you are in class. The secret is to study. There aren't really any tricks to it(not that I have discovered). It's recommended that you take Biochemistry in undergrad, but not really required at most places. I plan on taking it. Don't do what you think med schools want you to - do what you're interested in because admissions can see right though your attempts.

I can't think of anything else right now because I have work to do. I would give you my e-mail, but I don't want to display it publically. Just let me know through the comments box or whatever if you need more advice, I usually come back to check on Q's I have answered.

Anna Said:

I feel like I'm not good enough for Michigan State and I'm any national university? I feel worthless.?

We Answered:

what grade are you on?
if you're a junior, you could still join clubs next year.. try to get a summer job with some government job or an internship so it looks better for colleges. you seem pretty smart, if you don't get into Michigan state, you could still go to several other colleges! and there's a bunch of them.. you can always go to community college for your first semester, get a 4.0 GPA and transfer to the college of your choice.. or go to a cheap university, and get all your essential classes, like english etc, and then transfer.. there is all ways other choices you can take.. you're not a failure.. you're actually doing Altot better than me.. and im in ap classes to.. its a pain in the butt cuz i feel like im gonna fail the may tests too and im just overstressingg myself for nothing..
good luck!