Alicia Said:

is this a good SHORT paragraph?

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Indent at the beginning. Have a citation after your quote. Also include the exact book name if possible. "Makeup artists have jobs similar to itself too." Pretty awkward wording there, I would just say there are many jobs similar to what makeup artists do or something along those lines. Kindergarten isn't really considered a grade so edit that part. And you might want to add a "most" in front of "elementary school teachers have a talent for....." And for your ending, you just need to restate the thesis.

What grade are you in?

Glenda Said:

Why are Africans so ahead of African Americans ?

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True...do you think this creates a division amongst the two?

Michelle Said:

Which is a better career? Physical Therapist? Occupational Therapist?

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Ok this is a simple answer. I hope that you read this and understand it. I have been two out of the three. I am currently a physical therapist and was before that a recreational therapist. I work with many occupational therapists. Is it at all about how much school you want to do or even about money? To be an OT or a PT it will require you to get a higher education than a bachelors. This is important to understand because despite the fact that they do the same amount of schooling the PT generally makes more money. Job satisfaction depends on what you like. I could see finding job satisfaction in both. I like being a PT and I love the money. If it is about schooling try Recreation therapy because whether or not you get a masters in the program their is a good chance you will be paid the same. You can make up to 25 dollars an hour however $16 is more likely. so PT and OT = more school, but the PT you will like your job I think but will get paid more for it. TR not as much pay but school is a little easier on you. When I was a Rec. therapist I just wanted something more so I went back. If you do the PT route get that physics and chemistry taken care of now!!!!!! Don't wait like I did. Some of the people I went to school with for PT actually changed their major to chemistry because it helps with entry in to PT school IF you get good grades. That should help. I obviously favor PT but I would do RT before OT