Shannon Said:

Cover letter to employment agency?

We Answered:

You need to find someone to proof this. There are a couple of gramatical errors and if you are sending as is the spacing is wrong. The first sentence in the 2nd paragraph "will" should be willng. The next sentence isn't a complete sentence. You can take out however or put a semicolon before however, but that would make the sentence really long. I think I would lead off with the fact that you just graduated from college. If you had good grades, focus on that. Check out some of the on-line job sites for templates for coverletters for submitting resumes.

There should be a double space after your saluatation "Dear :" and after your last paragraph

Good luck!

Veronica Said:

Cover letter to employment agency?

We Answered:

NEVER start a sentence with "because." Use spellcheck--it's Peachtree, not Peacetree, unless they renamed it in the last few weeks.

Thomas Said:

I got a offer letter from Royal pacific Fisheries?

We Answered:

It sounds fishy to me. Contact the local authorities and see if there have been complaints about the company/